The pronoun should be objective case, "us." In the clause, "The primates remain inscrutable," "including" is a present participle modifying "primates." The participle, which is half verb and half adjective, takes "us humans" as a direct object. "Stay tuned" is a separate clause." Your dash is too weak a mark of punctuation to link the two. You have written a run-on sentence.
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